Brainstorm Summary to write Chapter 9:

13 - Sacrifices Are Made (or not) (666 words)
(Faced with the ultimate choice, the hero either succeeds in defeating their internal conflict and  winning against the monster, or fails and ultimately succumbs to their weakness)

14 - The Inevitable Fall Out (333 words)
(Show the consequences of whichever choice is made)

- Time for the fight between Madam and Elsie?

  - Madam and Luanne vs Elsie and Esther

- Elsie starts with argument with Madam about “We used to have good old ways, blah blah blah”.

  - Maybe Morningstar was for something good/empowering women?

- Computer is still “there”.

  - it is egging them on. Says he will serve the winner?  Elsie says fuck you, I don’t like you.  Oracle says fuck you then, go Team Madam??

- Elsie uses her metal bar to smash Oracle.  After the taunting she got from it, she is like: hey, I’ll fuck this shit up and smashes all electronic/computer stuff around.  Madam comes to stop her and gets hit.  Luanne decides things are getting too serious and abandons Madam’s side??

  - Elise gets Madam to the ground and is going to poke her face to death but Esther stops Elsie?

    - Esther says all these people died and the bog and gone and you’ve smashed the computer, just stop and let her go??

    - after Esther says, let’s not do this, they all decide to just part ways but Luanne isn’t ready to give up just yet so she attacks someone last minute as everyone is dispersing.   Luanne gets smashed in the head with the bar and killed.

  - Elsie is accepting that everything  has to change now with the bog gone.  She will continue to have a rehab/support getaway place and help people, but without the magic of the bog (which, how was the bog magic helpful in the first place? I don’t know, just go with it I guess)  Help battered women??

    - Elsie tells Madam to get the fuck out, Elsie’s in charge now and she wants to help people without controlling them/using bog magic??

      - Elsie asks Esther to stay on and run the business side of the business. Or Esther volunteers her time and company resources to support Elsie and her new track.  This can help Esther come to terms with what sexual harassment she has committed through helping other people??

- When Luanne is killed, her head is somehow taken off (not on purpose, just as a consequence of how she was killed).  This gives Madam the opportunity (in the NEXT chapter - chapter 10) to have a head.

- At the end of the ladies fighting or as they are cleaning up the workshop, the sun is coming up and who comes into the workshop?  Hank the bus driver!  He is here with a new busload of rehabbers and is wondering why no one is there to greet them/get them off his bus.